I think what you posted was very logical. But,
think about this, what if you added a little content?
I ain't saying your content is not solid, however
what if you added something that grabbed a person's attention? I mean FlipSide is kinda boring.
You ought to glance at Yahoo's home page and watch
how they create article headlines to get viewers
interested. You might add a related video or
a picture or two to grab readers interested about what you've got to
say. In my opinion, it could bring your posts a little livelier.